Goldilocks knock three times and the door opened it self . No one was being it the three bears door 1 tried the big Bear porridge she tried mummy bear porridge it was to hot and tried 2 the baby bear porridge too nice and then she got tired tried the big bear bed . she tried mother bear bed to soft. 3 then she tried baby bear bed. she run back back back to her home and she came back there again . the End .
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, July 2, 2020
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2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Jess I like the way that you included lots of detail
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thanks Liam by Jess
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