In the holidays i went to the mall with mum and Dad .
I saw the bird on my house .
I ate a Banana it was yummy .
I played basketball with my sister .
i stayed at home with my mum and my sister .
I went to MacDonald with my sister .
I am going to my friends home for the night
I went to the Riccarton with my sister
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Hey there I'm Liam from South Hornby school. I like the way you described the banana.Did you think about about what type of bird it was on your house? How come you did all that all in one day? from Liam
ReplyDeletehi Liam Jess here thank you
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