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Thursday, July 2, 2020

My Goldilocks story

Goldilocks knock   three    times  and the door    opened  it   self .  No one was being  it the three  bears door    1      tried the big Bear porridge she tried mummy bear porridge it was to hot and tried 2   the baby bear porridge too nice and then she got tired tried the big bear bed .  she tried mother bear bed to soft. 3 then she tried baby bear bed. she  run back back back to her home and she came back there again .                                     the End .


2 comments:

  1. Hello Jess I like the way that you included lots of detail


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